tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31928341.post2671790105182499680..comments2023-03-25T06:10:10.637-07:00Comments on Unlicensed Mommy: Jangle Bells LyricsJaneanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07665737969086029492noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31928341.post-1083285081050333932014-06-02T19:15:36.671-07:002014-06-02T19:15:36.671-07:00You did a great job on these lyrics, but I believe...You did a great job on these lyrics, but I believe I have two corrections:<br /><br />1. On line 8 where you have "You can have your old cliché" I'm pretty sure it should be "You can have your open shay".<br /><br />2. At line 13, "Jangle Bells, Jangle Bells, I have fed the fires" I feel certin is should read "Jangle Bells, Jangle Bells, I have paid the price" (it fits better with broken bones and even rhymes better with "ice").Mitchelnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31928341.post-83523112075098413752007-12-23T06:05:00.000-08:002007-12-23T06:05:00.000-08:00this is very funny ^-^this is very funny ^-^shiera (bisdakbabbles)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03112435978377852835noreply@blogger.com